Hi Jordy, this is Zana from the Summer Learning Journey. It is great that you are already participating in the teaser week activities and posting on your blog. I like that her favourite color is green so you used green for your text boxes. The color green also stands out really well against the blue background so it is easy to read and focus on the facts. Maybe you could add more images or go into more depth with the facts for example where was she born or add some more of her favourite things like food. I look forward to reading more of your posts over the summer! Ngā mihi nui, Zana Yates
Hi Jordy. Those are some really good facts you have added. Next time maybe you could add a question.Overall you did a really good job. I like how you made the textboxes her favourite colour. Keep up the good work.👍👍👍
Hi Jordy, I like your poster, is Lorde your favourite singer? I like how your boxes are green, her favourite colour. I personally thought she was older than 26. Maybe you could have added more facts. Did you know these facts before you made this?
Hi Jordy, I like how you added/displayed the facts in a creative way. I did not know anything about Lorde until I read this. Who is your favourite singer, and what is you r favourite song? Sincerely Dr. Joshua D. B.
Hi jordy i like your blog post she is a good singer and i like how you laid out the words and the back ground it is good And do you listen to any of her music? and you are doing a good job on you bloger but maybe you could add a bit more wrting other whys good.
Hi Jordy, this is Zana from the Summer Learning Journey. It is great that you are already participating in the teaser week activities and posting on your blog. I like that her favourite color is green so you used green for your text boxes. The color green also stands out really well against the blue background so it is easy to read and focus on the facts. Maybe you could add more images or go into more depth with the facts for example where was she born or add some more of her favourite things like food. I look forward to reading more of your posts over the summer!
ReplyDeleteNgā mihi nui,
Zana Yates
hi that is cool that you chose lord my Favorited famous person beer grills
ReplyDeletemaybe add a question but good job 🐱
good job Jordy 😀 that was good i liked that because you wrote a lot of fax about lord
ReplyDeletehi jordy thats very cool maybe you could add some more facts but its very cool.
ReplyDeleteHi Jordy. Those are some really good facts you have added. Next time maybe you could add a question.Overall you did a really good job. I like how you made the textboxes her favourite colour. Keep up the good work.👍👍👍
ReplyDeleteHi Jordy, I like your poster, is Lorde your favourite singer? I like how your boxes are green, her favourite colour. I personally thought she was older than 26. Maybe you could have added more facts. Did you know these facts before you made this?
ReplyDeleteHi Jordy. Those are some good facts. I like the colours you chose. Why did you choose Lorde?
ReplyDeleteHi Jordy,
ReplyDeleteI like how you added/displayed the facts in a creative way. I did not know anything about Lorde until I read this. Who is your favourite singer, and what is you r favourite song?
Sincerely Dr. Joshua D. B.
Hi jordy i like your blog post she is a good singer and i like how you laid out the words and the back ground it is good And do you listen to any of her music? and you are doing a good job on you bloger but maybe you could add a bit more wrting other whys good.
ReplyDeleteAnd there are very good facts in there.
DeleteHi Jordy i like your facts about Lorde i didn't know her real name was Ella and her faviroite color is grenn good job
ReplyDeleteGood work nice topic and great understanding really good work for a 8 year old really good facts you put in there maybe you have put a bit more though
ReplyDeleteHi Jordy, I like your post about Lorde. Why did you choose Lorde? Did she choose a different name for her singing career?
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